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Your Eyes.

May 24, 2009
By MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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Forever I’ll be lost in your eyes,
In your best kind of disguise,
Your eyes,
Are my deserted islands,
My broken road maps,
My favorite kind of missing,
My favorite kind of gone,
I wish never to be found,
For no one to seek me out,
But your eyes,
My spies,
Searching for my soul,
Lost in your eyes.

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Duckie430 said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 12:23 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is really beautiful :)

on Jul. 27 2009 at 5:00 pm
lexikeys247 SILVER, Forks, Washington
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i loved it!! "i wish never to be found" was my favorite part! i agree with the other comment. i loved the theme

on Jul. 2 2009 at 10:23 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I really liked your poem. I esp. love the theme. Eyes are the gateway to the soul, and I love how you went around that in your poem. It's very beautiful :) Keep writing!