Breakdown | Teen Ink


June 13, 2009
By Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships.
Michael Jordan

Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.
Mahatma Ghandi

Breakdown in the girls restroom,
watching my fists bleed,
staring at the bloody walls,
tears dropping to my feet.

Breakdown in my room,
screaming unheard,
alone with my anger,
while my sight is blurred.

Breakdown at school,
throwing my books,
running out of class,
everyone looks.

Breakdown at the cemetary,
drop down to my knees,
staring blankly at a stone,
wondering why it wasn't me.

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on Dec. 30 2010 at 1:11 am
2beautifulblueyes, SI, New York
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Favorite Quote:
if the one you luv brakes your heart built a bridge n get over it

this is such a great poem !! tagged as  my fav

on Dec. 24 2009 at 9:24 pm
miz.pretty.yung.thang SILVER, Fortmill, South Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
The love that lasts the longest is the love that is never returned

i luv this poem.u have good talent.check mines out

on Oct. 4 2009 at 5:04 pm
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

This was extremely incredible. Five stars! :) I love the use of imagery, and your choice in words. Check out my work if you'd like - I'm new here and it would be nice. Thank you.

on Jul. 15 2009 at 3:32 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

This was amazing. You are very talented. Keep up the good writing!!

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on Jul. 13 2009 at 1:25 am
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

GREaT job! this is really good, i agree the emotion in here is absolutely priceless. you have a gift ohh and check out my stuff:)

on Jul. 6 2009 at 5:37 am
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

This is amazing. I love the emotion in this. Very very good, Keep writing:)