She’s Like A Swan | Teen Ink

She’s Like A Swan

March 23, 2023
By vivianhuang BRONZE, Williston Park, New York
vivianhuang BRONZE, Williston Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"When I saw you, I fell in love, and you smiled because you knew." -William Shakespare


A royal swan pedals furiously underwater

Crest of white, bowed head upheld proudly

She wants to bring honor as a daughter


Not today, she withholds laughter

A glimmer of perfection standing stoutly

A royal swan pedals furiously underwater


“Mistakes are okay,” her parents offer

A sad smile glimmers to her face slowly

She wants to bring honor as a daughter


Everyone always wants to applaud her

She learns to balance her tiara correctly

A royal swan pedals furiously underwater


She learns that weakness doesn’t mean to falter

Breaking her habit of overusing “sorries”

She wants to bring honor as a daughter


Reassurance that parents will stay her protectors

Without their help, she cannot shine brightly

A royal swan pedals furiously underwater

She wants to bring honor as a daughter


The author's comments:

"She's Like A Swan" is a villanelle written about the pressures of being the best daughter you can be. It focuses on the pressures of trying to stay bright even when you feel like you are not good enough.


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