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Deer
When I walked to my car in the dark cold fall morning,
I heard a noise that sounded like a deer whining.
I slowly walked toward that noise,
and found a deer lying on the ground,
and the deer was trying to get up
but couldn't.
I looked at him to see what was wrong.
It looked like he had been attacked by another deer.
I said to myself I think he's dying.
I wanted to help,
but I couldn't help.
I got up and slowly walked to my car
thinking about how I could help.
I was also running late to school so I had to go
and leave the deer behind.
I wanted to stay
but couldn’t.
I thought about the deer all day
wondering if it was still alive.
When I got home,
I checked on the deer.
I said to myself hopefully he's ok and still alive.
But he wasn't.
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We get a lot of deer in our backyard every year in the summer and fall. They like to fight and play rough at times. When I was walking to my car I heard a noise at first and didn't know what it was but I was brave enough to walk toward the noise and found a deer lying on the ground. I felt bad for the deer because it was hurt and I didn't know if it would be alive when I came home from school. I am an animal person so seeing this deer hurt and pass away during the day made me sad. I think the deer fits with this theme because the theme is based on emotions and the deer sadly passed away. I formatted my piece the way I did because I got inspired by an example in class.