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Seven Days of Forever

January 17, 2024
By Puredotyahoo SILVER, Sylvan Lake, Michigan
Puredotyahoo SILVER, Sylvan Lake, Michigan
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Monday

In your eyes, I glimpsed fear the moment the doctor spoke,

You have six more days

You kneeled down, caressing my face

“I’m dying,” I said. 

“I don’t care,” you responded.


And that’s where it all started.

 

Tuesday

In a quaint cafe, we shared moments today,

You gently placed a coconut slice my way.

Flashing your boxy smile, I couldn’t help but notice,

It wasn’t as radiant as before, perhaps a hint of sadness

Despite its softened light, you made my day, forever

Thank you, my love, for remembering my favorite flavor


I have five more days

 

Wednesday

We went out on a date today, the air chill and crisp

My red nose, a telltale sign, you found there.

Playfully, but gently poking at it, your laughter in the breeze

Teeth chattering, a symphony, it seemed


Gingerly, your scarf embraced my neck gingerly,

As you slowly pushed my hair away from my face.

Just as I thought things couldn’t get any better,

Your hand found mine, connection ever so sweet

Underneath the winter’s cold command,

Our fingers entwined, like a promise, stand


I have four more days


Thursday 

I couldn’t meet you today,

I was out ice fishing with my grandparents.

Forgive me, my love, for not answering your text,

Lost in the moment, I forgot about the rest

I heard you asked for me when you saw my best friend

Thank you for your concern


I have three more days 


Friday

The following day, your greeting wrapped me tight,

A subtle warmth crept in, rising up to my cheeks

Hands numbly at my sides, I embraced the moment,

Your secure hug, time well-spent

How I wish it lasted longer


I have two more days


Saturday

I spent every second with you today,

You took me to meet up with your friends,

From your hangout, you left early without hesitation

For a picnic together, a sweet embrace.


You looked so adorable as you arranged the feast,

A playful tease drew a pout so sweet,

In every moment, my heart found its beat.

Thank you, my love, for making today extra special


I have one more day 


Sunday

Today was my last day—our last day

I could feel the universe whisper it to me

You held back tears, yet your eyes couldn’t deny.


“I’m sorry,” I uttered, a suffocating weight on my chest

I was time—months, days, hours, minutes, seconds

We were a ticking bomb that threatened to go off any moment

You shook your head and said, “I told you I don’t care.”


In the quiet, our silhouettes merged and swayed,

As I embraced this very bedroom,

We made countless memories in

I clasped your hand as I let out a labored breath

“I’m tired,” I admitted.

You nodded—you knew what I meant

Only God knew how much longer I wanted this to last

Your face, your voice, your smile—the last that I saw


“I’m happy, my love,” was the last that I said.

I was glad to know you—even it wasn’t forever


Then sleep took over me

Our story lingered, a bittersweet flame


The author's comments:

“Seven Days of Forever” is a heartfelt poem that unfolds over the course of a week, exploring the bittersweet reality of mortality. My aim is to leave readers reflecting on the profound impact of moments that mold our existence and to savor each instant with loved ones, recognizing the uncertainty of when those moments might become our last.

In the winter of 2020, fueled by the companionship of my first pet hamster Humphrey and the world slowing down in the pandemic’s quietude, I embarked on my writing journey. Since then, I've taken pleasure in writing everyday, resulting in the completion of two novels and numerous short stories and poems—some finding their way to publication. Over the years, I have developed great enthusiasm for classic literature. Some of my literacy influences are Elie Wiesel, Agatha Christie, F. Scott Fitzgerald, William Golding, and Betty Smith. 


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