Somewhere else | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Somewhere else

Somewhere else

July 13, 2009
By Angel4u SILVER, Woodbridge, Virginia
More by this author
Angel4u SILVER, Woodbridge, Virginia
9 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Cowards Die Many Times Before Their Death ; But The Valiants Never Taste of Death but Once&quot;.<br /> &quot;One&#039;s Heart Can Be Broken,but One&#039;s Faith Can Recover&quot;.<br /> &quot;Well Done Is Better Than Well Said&quot;.

View profile

I walked, but felt no warmth
I jumped, but saw no growth
I looked and looked again, but only found myself.
I've lived everyday like the last, but I wanted to remember my past.
I've made mistakes for so long, but never said I was wrong.

© Monica L., St. George, UT

The author's comments:
The message of the poem is that you don't always feel or get what you want.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Where I'm from
By Ejbgurl13check BRONZE
Pittsfeild, Massachusetts
Ejbgurl13check BRONZE, Pittsfeild, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Where it Ended
By Anonymous
Poetry
Baseball
By Anonymous
Poetry
Adventures with Scuba Steve
By Anonymous
Poetry
Breathe
By J.Elliott BRONZE
Ottawa, Illinois
J.Elliott BRONZE, Ottawa, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Im me....

View profile
Poetry
Dear all Liars: / Whoops!
By Anonymous

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.

jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

View profile
great job!!! i 100% understand the message. you put it into such a rhythmic poem it is very fun, easy and powerful to read :) bravo! keep writing, and also check out some of my work, i would love the comments!