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Untimely Love

July 27, 2009
By RachelEliza PLATINUM, Virginia Beach, Virginia
RachelEliza PLATINUM, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when theyre right, and sometimes good things fall apart so that better things can fall together -Marilyn Monroe

my body is hollow
my heart gone
i am dead.

i cannot feel
nor love
nor see any light
because my heart is truely gone.
broken like a china doll dropped,
i said three magic words
and your response?
i cry;
its the only thing i can do
the only thing i want to do,
because everything else reminds me of you,
because i am hollow,
with no heart:
i am dead.

The author's comments:
it sucks to have your heart broken.

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on Aug. 16 2009 at 2:44 am
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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This poem is one of the best poems I have read in a long time. I like how you compare your heart to a broken china doll. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem, understand it, and enjoy it. Keep writing.