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When the Stars Came to Visit that Night
July 28, 2009
The stars came to visit that night,
To sneak upon love's heavy eyes,
As they kissed their daughter goodnight.
And as she laid in their light,
To give into her body's cries,
The stars came to visit that night.
They danced about in delight,
Spinning as their dresses devised,
As they kissed their daughter goodnight.
So as to settle their plight,
While the parent's planned the emprise,
The stars came to visit that night.
It was prior to the child's wedding night,
When the stars were in their moonlit skies,
As they kissed their daughter goodnight.
The girl tossed in bundles of white,
And while she laid, none the wise,
The stars came to visit that night,
As they kissed their daughter goodnight.
© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA
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despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 1:15 pm
No prob :)
TheWaitress SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:56 pm
:) I'm sure you did. Well, thanks anyway for commenting :).
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:44 pm
Well that stinks. UGH I put so much thought into that commment tooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TheWaitress SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:23 pm
Hmm gonna have to say I didn't receive it. I did however receive a comment from you on Inkpop about Teenink. But no comments on teen ink.
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:01 pm
on teenink :)
TheWaitress SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 10:29 am
lol it's np, infact a bit funny. Emm did you comment here on teenink or is it on the other site?
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 7:16 pm
My bad lol Sorry I couldnt remember the title exactly :( but did u recieve the comment? lol I really am sorry though! Ahh I feel horrible now
TheWaitress SILVER said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 6:51 pm
Np ;)...lol sadly though I didn't receive your comment on "Ocean" since I don't have a peice titled under that name :D.
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 5:07 pm
Thank you so much! That really really really means a lot to me! Did you get the comment reply I left on "Ocean"?
TheWaitress SILVER said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 4:11 pm
I read this while listening to Melodramma by Andrea Bocelli. The two go hand in hand quite well :). I've never read something that gave me chills before, that's called great writing! Thanks for the chills through my body as I read this great poetic masterwork!
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:11 am
wow this is great! it has rythym, a great layout, and a sweet story! i really really like it! thanks for your comments on my article "remembering". im glad i decided to check out your other work cuz this one is just as good as your others! but wow i love this poem, it has a really sweet and honest meaning! great job. check out some of my other work :)
P.S. Some of the lines are a little longer, so if the structure appears to differ from the 3-3-3-3-3-4 pattern, it's because of the line length. (I'm not sure how it will look once actually published on the website,which is the reason for this little postscript). Thanks for understanding. :)