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depression of a young girl

July 31, 2009
By babyrissa212 SILVER, Boca Raton, Florida
babyrissa212 SILVER, Boca Raton, Florida
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As I lay on down to sleep
I dream,awaken,and begin to weep
I draw the razor across my arm
Knowing it would do some harm
1,2,3 scars and many more
I drop the razor and fall to the floor
I scream and begin to cry out loud
I need a doctor,quick,right now
I try to get up but am way too weak
The blood rushing out,I hear running feet
MY brother rushes in seeing blood on the tile
He calls 911 but it takes a while
I slowly begin to close my eyes
He whispers stay awake and begins to cry
I take my last breath saying goodbye
And in his arms I slowly die

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this because during the time I was facing alot of issues and got worked up about them and caused myself harm which inspired me to write true poetry on life.

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This article has 3 comments.

babyrissa212 said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 5:37 am
yea well my life is messed up that is why i wrote this.

Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 6:50 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

Great work. Not myself, but I know other people can really relate. Today, teens find that cutting themself is the only way out, although that is not true. Wonderful job and this is very touching!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 10:42 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

Wow. And i thought my life was bad. I understand, well to an extent. let me point out that without terrible things in the world, there wouldnt be wonderful things to make up for it or heal the wounds.