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God is in the Rain

August 1, 2009
By oddpen SILVER, Shapleigh, Maine
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You have to make the descending notes sound more like psychotic laughter!<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Dr. Keller~

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"God is in the rain," she said.
I didn't believe her.
But the I felt it,
The soft caress of rain against my face,
My body,
My soul.
Whispering, screaming,
Crying, laughing,
Loving, hating,
Living, dying,
All in one drop.
Thousands of drops fall like tears,
Whether of joy or sorrow I do not know,
But still they fall,
Fall on me.
I open my arms up to the sky to welcome them,
Let them into my soul and mind.
She smiles.
"God is in the rain..."

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oddpen SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 8:29 am
oddpen SILVER, Shapleigh, Maine
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have to make the descending notes sound more like psychotic laughter!<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Dr. Keller~

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I actually got the idea for this poem from the movie V for Vendetta. In one part, it talks about God being in the rain, and I never forgot that part.
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 7:34 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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This is so wonderful and beautiful, I love how it tells a little story! I agree with Electricity and TheHandThatWieldsThePen that it's beautifully spiritual. LOVE IT!
TheHandThatWieldsThePen SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2009 at 11:10 pm
TheHandThatWieldsThePen SILVER, Shapleigh, Maine
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&quot;Let&#039;s waste time<br /> chasing cars<br /> around our heads.&quot;<br /> --Chasing Cars by Snow Patrol<br /> <br /> &quot;I do believe it&#039;s true<br /> there are roads left in both of our shoes<br /> if the silence take you then I hope it takes me too.&quot;<br /> --Soul Meets Body by Death Cab For Cutie

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I really like this one, it's spiritual in a way that isn'tpreachy or spiritual...if that makes sense. :-)
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 10:49 am
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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Wow, interesting. I like it a lot. Comparing God to rain is something I used to do. WHen ever it would rain, God was sad. When there was a storm, he was angry. Great poem, keep writing!