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Jack and Jill-part 1

August 10, 2009
By lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 68 comments

A young, smart, outgoing girl.
A young, smart, outgoing guy.

They have so much.
And yet they don't know it.
Why can't they see-
That they are truely meant to be.

He is my cousin,
she is my best friend.
I just want them to be together in the end.

They remind me of the song "We Belong Together."
She is the girl, he is the guy.
He likes a more popular girl.
But Joslynn's too shy-
to tell him how she feels,
that he should be her guy.

The author's comments:
This is about two people that I care soo much about that I wish would just get together. I think that a piano represents there relationship really well. They are just black and white-they don't have any color yet.

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on Nov. 15 2009 at 8:58 pm
ShrimpyBB SILVER, Gresham, Oregon
6 articles 5 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was being fasitious!"

Funny poem Lex, specially these days...Kiwi has a point tho. And I can see why Jos was frustrated at the fact you actually used her name and Drew's. Lol.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 11:30 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
This a very cute and clever poem. But wait till your friend is ready, kay? let them make their own decisions.