Hopefully | Teen Ink


August 10, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

His bright warm smile
Makes my face glow
It makes me beam in sunlight
And melt in the snow

His green eyes make me stumble
They make me stare into outer space
I want to look into them forever
Till the dead end of my days

I wish he would look at me
And think the same way about my smile
And about my eyes
But it’s a long shot, not within a mile

You see he moved away recently
A block from my house
The only trouble is
Well, anyone could see it. Even a mouse

He used to be good
And such a great guy
But someone gave him something
Now he’s surreally despised

My dad doesn’t like him
And neither does my mom
But I do, a lot
They just don’t understand him

All he need is a little love
And a little less of that other stuff
Okay, a lot less
And maybe a good shove

Then I could catch him in my arms
And he would look up at me and smile
I would kiss his soft cheek
And hold onto his hand a while

He would fall for me
And I will keep him straight,

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This article has 4 comments.

on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:23 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Thanks for your comments and i'm not sure why i fell for him. My friends are trying to find out but i just cant seem to understand why.

on Aug. 28 2009 at 12:27 am
kayleefaith PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
37 articles 0 photos 18 comments
i really love this!

on Aug. 26 2009 at 8:34 pm
Casey Loew GOLD, Newport, New Jersey
14 articles 5 photos 1 comment
thank you so much for the comments... This poem is really great it reminds me alot of my own life

on Aug. 24 2009 at 1:43 pm
oohh! i like the rhyme at the beginning and the creativity and the story i draw up in my mind. just two of the stanzas don't have any good rhyme.