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The beauty of the heavens

July 31, 2009
By ashleyt PLATINUM, Midland, Texas
ashleyt PLATINUM, Midland, Texas
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When rain falls the lightning is god taking pictures,
The great water is the tears of the angels,
The thunder is the sounds of the dead,
Of the after ones,
You might think it’s sad,
I treat it as a reminder that our loved ones no longer here are still watching us,
When your alone you’re not,
The funeral releases their soles,
It lets them breathe,
Once they pass their beauty goes into the earth,
Into the flowers,
Their attitude spreads throughout the earths people,
Their sole is in heaven watching,
You might wonder why god lets the soles still watch us,
God watched and he’s the one,
who gave us what we loose through hurt,
Through harmony,
And justice,
A smile is worth a million frowns,
A tear is worth so much more,
Someday the beauty will come around,
The great disapears and the hope comes in.

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on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:49 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

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i'm going to remember this when i lose someone. you did a beautiful job writing this, i love the creativity. you gave a negative affect and turned it into having beautiful meanings. i love this a lot! :) well done. very strong and emotional...i don't know what esle to say! check out my work and comment, i love the feedback. 4 stars :)