i <3 this, especially the last 2 lines

Wow. This is amazing. It certainly surpasses anything I ever could have written. Even the last line alone (which by the way was so powerful I wanted to tear out my hair and weep like a child) was more honest and well-written then what I find from the most well versed persons ever considered to make a dent in the history of poets. You've done a remarkable job. I don't know if I'll retain any respect at all for the editors if they don't include this in the magazine. Personally I think they should consider it an honor. I can't wait to see what you become as writer, for I'm sure your name won't be unrecognized too much longer among the public. You add something to you're poetry that I don't often see: it's a devotion to the reader. This poem is not in anyway easy to read; you force the reader to dig deeper within themselves, past the layers of caloused emotion that society has built up, until they expose their most pure self. They have to put forth an effort to connect the dots. Once again, marvelous, marvelous, work. You pieces are a blessing among the literary world.

God bless,

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this is absolutely fantastic. you rock! keep it up :]

btw i gave it a five

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wow. i like this poem a lot, because it's totally true, you know?

That was really great! Seriously, I'm not just saying that. I wish i could write that well. Keep writing, you're doing fantastic! <3

This is a great poem. Kudos. Keep on submitting!!

Wow, powerful. I love it!