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Little Lies MAG

By Anonymous

   Lies

ooze

from your lips

like peanut butter

sliding

down

the

side

of

the

jar.



Falling

too fast -

You can't catch it ...

the damage is done.





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on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:02 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

love this, seems simple yet is a very important topic

on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:14 am
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I like it very much! Even the structure of the poem itself is awesome. However you used "peanut butter sliding down the side of the jar" as a metaphor then you say "falling too fast-". But peanut butter is very stick...and moves slow. I think you could've thought of something different....Other than that, it's a great poem and an especially great topic, love it! And when you get the time check out my opinion essay on animal rights/ vegetarianism