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Dreaming Of You

October 4, 2009
By DizzyRae PLATINUM, Fort Washington, Maryland
DizzyRae PLATINUM, Fort Washington, Maryland
20 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For one human being to love another; that is perhaps the most difficult of our tasks; the ultimate, the last test and proof; the work for which all other work is but preparation.”
-Rainer Maria Rilke


Dreaming of You

As I dream of a future that becomes intertwined with mines. I see myself not being brought down by challenges but brought up from love and emotions. I dream of those emotions that were born from the root through visions. Visions of what will now be called the past. The past where the emotions started to grow from that one vision and day that I realized that what I want can become something I will have. Something that was so simple and common everywhere but from where I am standing I see what changed me and made me realize that there is another way to live. Not to live just for knowledge but to live to see that vision play over and over again through that bright light. That one bright light that made shed tears because of its brightness and beauty. It stands in the way of that wonderful vision I replay to see what I want and how angel like it has become. As the vision begins to fade and the light becomes brighter I feel its presence like it’s been long since we met. I reach forward to touch it and am surprised when it grabs my hand and gives warmth to my hand like I was finally the one. Then in a sudden change the light bursts to where I can see through it while it is fading. What I see is the same vision I was so eager to see once again. It was the simple thing that I was smiling at the same way and time as my past self was. When the light and vision vanish together I wake up and look to my left. I am happy to see the same common and simple thing that is holding my hand as if I was disappearing right from beside it. I smile again as I see that the hand that is being held is the same hand that light held. Just then I realize again…What I want can become something I will have and what I wanted has become something I live for.

The author's comments:
My girlfriend inspired me...We have been together for 15 months now & we r still truly in love....

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on Oct. 13 2009 at 2:03 pm
DizzyRae PLATINUM, Fort Washington, Maryland
20 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For one human being to love another; that is perhaps the most difficult of our tasks; the ultimate, the last test and proof; the work for which all other work is but preparation.”
-Rainer Maria Rilke

Thank You! I really tried.. Im still trying to write some new ones though

on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:52 pm
RhyanWoods SILVER, Glendale, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always two people in every picture: The photographer and the viewer.

This made me shiver. It is so great. Keep writing, work like this should be seen.