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Rain Reaching Radicalism MAG

By Anonymous

   How Radical is the Rain?
Plummeting from a darkened sky,
Dampening landsthat once went dry;
Eroding soil's nutrients.

Smuggling weapons indisguise,
Aggravating the Acidity,
Obstructing peace and quiet.
Teardrops, Dew drops
These structures are not.

The Rage of the Rain hasbeen made to estrange,
Tyrannical targets,
Unbridled, Untamed;
NatureRemains a part of the Wild!

No one can be to blame,
For storm cloudsare the harbinger of Rain;
Powerful pockets meant to contain the moisture oversporadic times
Until it is forced to relinquish its domain,
And there is anoutpouring from the skies;
To quench the sun-parched cracking smile upon theface of Mother Earth.
Now, would that be considered Radical?



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on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:31 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:31 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Love this!!!!!!!!!! It's so, almost, rebellious, that is, saying that rain is radical. What a unique idea!!! And beautiful, too.