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The Music

January 11, 2010
By TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

I'm getting lost in the silence I don't know where else to go I'm stuck in my own destruction My lifes either yes or no Only thing keeping me sane Is the music that surrounds me Even when my worlds crumbling It tells me where to be Taken over by sadness I stand on my own two feet I block out other noises March to the sound of my own beat The point I am trying to make Is that I don't know anymore Besides the feeling of nothing The music is my only cure

The author's comments:
Meaning:The music can heal everything if you let it.

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This article has 6 comments.

on Jul. 5 2010 at 8:33 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i loove the meaning!! plus this is beautifully worded. good job^^

on Feb. 14 2010 at 6:07 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 430 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

I've read quite a few of your things now, and I think EVERYONE can relate to this.

I agree with BelmaH, very imaginable and you can totally see the thought and feelings put in this!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 5:18 pm
SwordGirl SILVER, Apex, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life."

-- Winston Chuchill

Wow! That's amazing! I love the way the emotion is welling up behind the words.

BelmaH said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 4:02 pm
i will have to agree 1005 with severeannoyance. i liked the vivid imagery and overflowing emotions!

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:29 pm
I really like the flow of this. It's very vivid and emotional, but, as odd as it sounds, I'm afraid the formatting threw me a little off-balance; seeing it all crammed up in a paragraph made it kind of difficult to follow. Otherwise, it was a compelling and interesting poem.

Alex33 SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:53 pm
Alex33 SILVER, Valley Park, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How vain it is to sit down to write when you have not stood up to live.”
Henry David Thoreau

this is really good... i wish i could write poetry... if u were going for an emotional approach, then you succeeded...