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suicide

May 8, 2008
By Anonymous

suicide
a beautiful girl
with thoughts of blood
ozzing through her thoughts

life without love
love without life
how do i make this pain stop
why did it start

painless torture
loveless vertue

why is this hell
that we call life
so messed up

can my riddler riddle me that


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on Dec. 8 2021 at 8:16 pm
ILiveToRead PLATINUM, Wailuku, Hawaii
24 articles 3 photos 142 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My music will tell you more about me than I ever will, don't ask me what i'm feeling, ask me what song am I listening to." "I think I'm afraid too be happy, because whenever I get to happy, something bad always happens."

@cheetoz45680 im not sure that is a very appropiate or even respectful response to a poem like this one

on Jul. 14 2011 at 11:09 pm
feetwithwings GOLD, Powell, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"My stomach had the rumblies that only hands would satisfy." - Carl from Llamas with hats

i totally understand, amazing...

on May. 17 2011 at 1:58 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

amazing, you should check out my stuff

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on Feb. 11 2011 at 9:41 am
Eposlove, Owego, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You can love the one you trust, but cant trust the one you love.

wow i love it.. it was really good... where im from its like suicide is a joke it sucks...they laugh at us for thinking it... well again good job

 


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on Dec. 12 2008 at 4:09 pm
i think you need a hug.