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Cry of a Victim

May 14, 2008
By Audrey Aavik BRONZE, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
Audrey Aavik BRONZE, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Falling faster
Headed for disaster

Nothing stops me
Nobody hears my plea

Hitting the ground
Too late to turn around

My soul shatters
No one thinks it matters

Running away
To somewhere I can stay

Open my eyes
To see the crimson skies

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Enderman GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2013 at 3:54 pm
Enderman GOLD, No, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no monster greater than a lack of compassion."

-Master Splinter, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles

This is AMAZING!  I loved this poem SO much!  I am definately putting this one in my favorites!!!  Never stop writing!

angela a. said...
on Jan. 11 2009 at 10:05 pm
Awesome, Audrey. I'm proud of you. hope you continue to write. Love, mom