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It's The Distance

April 7, 2010
By BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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It's the distance that seperates us.
From being together.
But i am telling you this now.
I will love you forever.

Your a guy unlike the rest.
I say you are the best!

Cause no matter what i do
I can NOT stop thinking of you
Your controling my mind
For a person like me your way to kind.

I want to feel you lips on mine
Our heartbeats beating together
I wanna lay down next to you
And stay there forever.

I wanna forget the bad
Block it away
With you thats possible
Cause your just amazing in every way :)

LOVE YOU FOREVER :)

© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK

The author's comments:
This is a poem i wrote for my boyfriend. He lives in Kentucky and I never get to see him. But we make the distance work. I'm hoping that this will get you guys and gals thinking about someone you love and that means the world to you. Who ever your thinking of you should never let that person go no matter what anyone says! 'Cause thats just what love is all about (: <3
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BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2011 at 7:20 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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will do. thank you(:
Danica SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 9:13 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
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&quot;It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities.&quot; -- Albus Dumbledore

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This is SO sweet! And it flows really nicely too :)  Check out and rate some of my stuff sometime?
Key14 GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 12:32 am
Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
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If Love is a Lie then is Hate the Truth<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Crosskey

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how do i email you on this ive been wondering for months
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 26 2010 at 10:28 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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hehee awww thankss! :D email me some time maybe we can exchange poems?
Key14 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:39 am
Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
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If Love is a Lie then is Hate the Truth<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Crosskey

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believe it or not thats one of those poems that makes the guys feel like "why aren't there more girls loke you" Lol
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:33 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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THANK! (= most of my poems come from waht i'm feeling about codyy.... i have tried song lyrics butt i am naught to great at it. but all i need is a little practice....thanks for checking my stuff! (=
DejaVu SILVER said...
on May. 18 2010 at 1:40 pm
DejaVu SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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All is fair in love and war

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This poem is meaningful. I was reading the comments others posted and you said that "its hard for me to read this over again because me and cody arent together anymore." I applaud you for writing about this about someone. TO write a poem about someone like this.... it means you have a strong heart. What makes it even stronger is writing poetry about people who you dont know anymore that you might have once "loved" or whatever your meaning of love is. TO me love is kinda lost. THat was what inspired my poems Heartbreak and Heartless. I encourage you to keep writing. Write anything! Even song lyrics and just give it a try, who knows you might be a good writer.
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 6:13 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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hehee why thank youu (:

....its hard for me to read this over again cause me and cody arent together anymore ):

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 2:54 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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&quot;Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant.&quot; -Deepak Chopra

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I really loved this :)
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 2 2010 at 1:48 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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awwiee i'mm sorry hunn. i have been through thatt! my poems are eusually about guyss loll
haya726 SILVER said...
on May. 2 2010 at 11:56 am
haya726 SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
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lol, yh i know i do write poems and a lot of them, but their nt love poems their about the feelings that i get wen i wanna cry or hw ppl treat my ppl or anything!!!! i have this one poem that i love to reread it makes me think about the guy tht i like, bt he's more than 2000 miles away he doens't live in america so i dn't c him a lot :'(

 ^_^ :) :p

BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 11:19 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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aww. well givee it a shot. wright a lotta stuff. bout feelings what your doing what you wanna do what you wanna be. you name it! you'll gett better as time goes by. trust me! its a great way to let out your feelings and emotions and stuff too! justt keep trying andd i'mm suree you'll come up with at least onee masterpiece! :D
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 11:17 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

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i rele dont care who sees my number if its a creeper i juss block their number. 

but thankss! i havee other poems pending approval right noww

bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 10:17 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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aww i really like this. soo cutee. keep writingg

1 suggestion: I would get ur # off da site. thatz the only thingg..

haya726 SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 2:56 pm
haya726 SILVER, Dearborn, Michigan
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wow that was really good i would love to one day write love poems, but in my life that is more inpossible than saying someone can stand on the sun!!!