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Losing You
My heart aches
From the loss of you
Everyday that I'm still living
I wish that you were too.
When I look at your picture
So many memories flood back
Reminding me of you
The one person in my life I now lack.
Can't you see me grieving
From up above?
Can't you see you're hurting
Someone that you love?
You know I'm going to miss you
Every second that I breathe
The fact that you're gone
Is still hard to believe.
But I'll remember
To keep a smile on my face
Because right now I know
That you're in a better place.
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I'm Sorry For Your Loss. But This Is A Really Pretty Poem(: I Can Feel A Little Remorse &Nd Have It Fixed When Knowing This Person Is In A Better Place(:
-Jaiden(: AKA:iluvuiluvunot
I am so sorry for you loss. I can understand the pain since my grandma passed away in Feb this year.
When I read this, I cried because I could honestly say that you wrote this for me. Except for the last stanza. I can't put a mile on my face because I can't say that she is in a better place and am regretting everyday that I didn't spend more time with her sharing the Gospel.
I really feel weird about analyzing something so personal like this. I'm sorry that I couldn't be helpful.
very touching.bravo!
Very touching and well written. I love poems that actually rhyme and have a rhythm. It made it more heartfelt and genuine. I'm sorry about your grandmother. Thank you for checking out my thread. I would love if you could check out my other work also! :)
First person I lost; I'll miss you & love you forever! ?