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Raw Emotion

July 9, 2010
By Amommylikeme BRONZE, Horton, Alabama
Amommylikeme BRONZE, Horton, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a never ending classroom with homework everyday." - Heather Bennett`


The love unseen behind the fear
the one that's real and raw and rare
while i sit and cower there
his hand held high up in the air
time stands still as i wait
for the inevitable blow time ticks away
he laughs and smiles "is this what you wanted?
i don't wanna hurt you, you made me mad and you taunted"
as he's standing above i can't help but stare
ask my self why i love him and why i'm still there
then i look in the crib as my son dreams so sweet
he'll need him one day so i just lay down and sleep



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on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:15 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

I love the power and the emotion in this!! the rhyme sceme is also great!!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!