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And All is Won When Lost

August 7, 2010
By M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Thinking of what could’ve been
Doesn’t mend the broken strings
Lying to one’s self only makes them thin
But the thoughts will lock themselves in heavy metal rings

The love wont be forgotten; and the loath will burn in flames
Hatred with a passion and loving with each heart beat
Looking back and looking forward never knowing who’s to blame
Step by step temptation wants to cheat

Pride is not important when the heart is in desperate need
It’s lost its other half and no one can stop the bleeding
The pieces start to shatter and it starts to cry and plead
But no one can hear it screaming, He cant hear it screaming

Several pieces on the floor covered in red stains
Is that what one is given for falling in love?
The horrid drops of hard cold rain?
The crushing feeling of an ended song?

Or could it be that there was never love?
Is it possible that one could be obsessed?
Those are the right questions to get sick of
It’s a hardship to rip them off your chest

The failure haunts one’s head and makes the world demented
The self control and sanity one had soon begins to fade away
A rose will be no match for what He had scented
The scent one wishes to have everyday

The sun and moon are nothing compared to the eyes in one’s head
Just the sight of the memory will rise what was left dead
The river wont sound beautiful in comparison to the voice in one’s mind
The insanity will take over and love will make one blind

Love has no boundaries and all consequences
There is the most fair love for the luckiest ones
But there is the most heartbreaking for others
But heartbreak or happiness it can only make one stronger


The author's comments:
This is one of the poems,alike to the ones many girls write when their hearts are broken, and that's why I've written it because I hope many of them will agree with what I have said.

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on Dec. 20 2010 at 4:50 am
M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
5 articles 3 photos 12 comments

its worth the wait

i just uploaded two more

called Obsession is my sport and my dear creator its funny cuz i wrote them the same week and they are completely different haha

keep reading and i'll keep writting;]


on Dec. 9 2010 at 5:01 pm
ashley-llorens SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!"

Me too! I cheak everyday! I'm just waiting and waiting. lol.

on Dec. 9 2010 at 1:19 am
M.Martinez SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
5 articles 3 photos 12 comments

thanks:]

cant wait to read yours=]


on Dec. 7 2010 at 9:07 pm
ashley-llorens SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game!"

FAVORITE!!!!! (: I love this one so much! (: It spoke to me.