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I Tore The Walls (You Said Goodbye)
June 2, 2008
The ripped wallpaper reveals black holes,
So like my soul, my heart that you stole,
And I hang in the silence of agony,
And I hang in the agony of cold
I gave you a key on a necklace of glass,
I want it to mask, but the demon does pass,
And I cower in shadow of my fury,
And I cower in fury of your last
My hands itch to hold you on last time,
To cross the line, to call you mine,
And I die in the burning of the sun,
And I die while the sun still shines
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TRAPBOYZ5 said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 9:52 am
MAN THYSE POEM IZ STRAIGHT IT AINT ALL THT THO I KAN DO BETTA SO KEEP IT GUDDY AN RITE A BETTA ONE SHAWTY
mrittmritt77 GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 8:22 pm
i like it :) and the rhyming pattern's unique too. nice work
grammargurl BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:48 am
The line "my hands itch to hold you one last time" is very relatable. This poem is written very powerfully and put a lot of thought into it.
Farmer said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:43 am
This is a good poem. You can really see what the writer is talking about. Good job!
jamiejean12 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:42 am
I really liked this poem. It is very relatable and i like the detail put into it.
Treckintime SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 8:03 pm
This is really good. But can you like maybe explain what "And I cower in the fury of your last." means? It would make a lot more sense if i knew. Oh and can you please check my work and see if you like it and comment and rate?
Luminescence BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2010 at 8:18 pm
Wow, this is very good! You obviously put a lot of emotion into it.
Mirror_Of_You said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 2:17 am
I definitely agree - I love this poem! I love how you repeat the main ideas, and then extend then. Elaborate them. I think it has great potential to be the best actually.
tammy said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 11:47 pm
i love this poem. it discribes a lot of things in live that all i have to say
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