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Burned Out

October 16, 2010
By Deszy6028 PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
Deszy6028 PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You write such pretty word, but lifes no story book. Loves and excuse to get hurt, and to hurt. Do you like to hurt, I do. I DO! Then hurt me.

Wishing you would come wake me from this hell.
When it burns you inside it starts to swell.
A part of my heart is gone, never to return.
Please come help me heal my burn.
I think it's third degree, please help me.
I'm screaming in agony and in pain.
The flame is starting to spread, I think I'm almost dead.
It's to late for me to be saved.
So my body shall lay lifeless on the ground.
Darkness is all to be found.
The final flame burned out, leaving my soul no longer to scream and shout.

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I was having a rough time. So I put my feelings all together and this is what was the outcome. I hope you liked it. Please give a comment or some advice on what to write about next, or what you liked or even disliked about this piece of my work. Thank you for reading. :-)

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