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Heartless Herald Skylark

June 4, 2011
By msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
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msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
I have my own particular sorrows, loves, delights; and you have yours. But sorrow, gladness, yearning, hope, love, belong to all of us, in all times and in all places. Music is the only means whereby we feel these emotions in their universality. ~H.A. Overstreet

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Heartless herald skylark
Visit me no more
I can't help but give out a cry
When I see you at my door.

You found your perfect hiding place
Behind a dead mans resting face
To tell me my love is a waste
Beyond the gates of war

Heartless herald skylark
Please try to ignore
My tender hearts rough pounding
Eating away my core.

Expressionless you mock my pain
With face as hard as stoney rain
No mourn to give what could have been
Or the way it was before

Heartless herald skylark
Why visit me, I implore
When all you do
Is mock my rue
Detaining my front door

© Dillon O., Pompton Plains, NJ

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ninjamuffin SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 10:34 pm
ninjamuffin SILVER, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are often unreasonable, illogical, and self-centered. Love them anyway.&quot;<br /> Mother Teresa

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Brilliant! I thought it was amazing; best poem I have ever read in my life!
WithPenAndScript DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:57 pm
WithPenAndScript DIAMOND, Venetia, Pennsylvania
72 articles 232 photos 251 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe that no matter who you are we all leave footprints on this Earth

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I enjoy the repition of this poem and the word chouce. 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 4:44 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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It's brilliant. The rhyming is wonderfully done. Your words and emotion in the poem are fantastic.

:)

msn9896 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:41 pm
msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have my own particular sorrows, loves, delights; and you have yours. But sorrow, gladness, yearning, hope, love, belong to all of us, in all times and in all places. Music is the only means whereby we feel these emotions in their universality. ~H.A. Overstreet

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Thanks, my teacher said it reminded her of Edgar Allen Poe. 
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:34 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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The rhyming was absolutely brilliantly done. =) Great job!
austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:34 am
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

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This was great! When I was reading it, I felt like I was reading work by an older, classical poet!  I highly enjoyed it :)
msn9896 GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:57 pm
msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have my own particular sorrows, loves, delights; and you have yours. But sorrow, gladness, yearning, hope, love, belong to all of us, in all times and in all places. Music is the only means whereby we feel these emotions in their universality. ~H.A. Overstreet

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Ha ha thanks!  this is one of my favorites, and the first I posted. I'm kind of a newbie at this :)

 

thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:31 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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I love the rhythm of this poem, the meaning, and your choice of words! It was an absolutely lovely poem and I give you a thumbs way up! `""