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Darling I'm Fine, and You?

June 1, 2011
By LouLouHeartBreak GOLD, Haw River, North Carolina
LouLouHeartBreak GOLD, Haw River, North Carolina
13 articles 21 photos 54 comments

I have fears
I shed tears
we make a great pair
and pain I can bear
but the truth you seek
is making you weak
with a small speaking session
you send out a question
my heart is breaking
and my soul you are taking
as you shout hey
sweetie are you ok
I walk away
and say what you think is true
darling I'm fine. and you?



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on Nov. 17 2011 at 10:06 am
LouLouHeartBreak GOLD, Haw River, North Carolina
13 articles 21 photos 54 comments

no i just write lyrics. my friends play but i dont

 


on Nov. 17 2011 at 10:06 am
LouLouHeartBreak GOLD, Haw River, North Carolina
13 articles 21 photos 54 comments
no i just write lyrics. I would give them to family of friends that play.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:05 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

That's cool. Do u write music, and if so for what instument?

on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:50 am
LouLouHeartBreak GOLD, Haw River, North Carolina
13 articles 21 photos 54 comments

Thank you. I actually did stop with poems. Im currently writing lyrics

 


on Nov. 10 2011 at 2:35 pm
liveincolor GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
17 articles 3 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
You need to be the change you wish to see in the world. ~Ghandi

This is really good.  I love the point of view from which it is spoken.  Keep writting :)