When You Left | Teen Ink

When You Left

August 26, 2011
By HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Forsaken, Forgotten
did you to me.
When I proposed
to be with thee.
That was when
you departed from me.
In so it became
forever ago
you left me
the idea of "we" behind
Now you return
expect “us” to be
but foreign you became to me
Forgotten and abandon
did the idea of "we"
became to me.
So long ago
when I first proposed
the idea of "you and me "
Now you are sad
and filled with regret
Because we can never be
for I have chosen another.
One more beautiful
and much more willing
to be with me.
Now you know of the truth of what love can be:



Just like what you did to me
and the idea of "we"
all those years ago
When you left…

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Jan. 14 2013 at 1:09 pm
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
11 articles 0 photos 27 comments
this one really spoke to me, it made me feel somthing deep within myself.... your words just explode in all the best ways.

on Dec. 18 2012 at 11:43 am
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
22 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

wow!  i like this a lot! keep it up!