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Disinfected

October 6, 2011
By DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.


Disinfect

The all-infected

Supersticious

Race erected

From the ashes

Of neglected

Moral - truth

Never detected

Disinfect

What death

Undid



Redefine

What life,

one time,

In a moment

Became mine

In a moment

Became thine

What life?

Terror, death

And crime?

Redefine

What made

Him mine



Confiscate

The vices laid

Never-ending

Coarse unsated

Souls, full filled

With slime and hatred

Overruning

Never slaked, did

The river flow

And make

Our cups run over?

Confiscat-

ing vices paid

Over again

Forever?



Disinfect

The unexpected

And expect

To be detected

Beaten, stoned

Torn, neglected

For the sake of

Slaking hate

'Fore it's too late

And time runs fine

With blood and whine

The souls of crime

Death, black slime

Running down

The black, infected

Wall of life

Now death, erected

From the shame

Of Adam's name

Lay the blame

Nigh on you

On Him



Neglected

Undetected

Unerected

Uninfected

Redefined

Undenied

Crucified

Confiscated

Resurected

Elevated

Now awaited



So we strive

To disinfect

Those still alive

Until the next

Ageless eon

Sees us taken

In the skies

Away to heaven

To the world

From which the Lord

Ascended

Ammended

And defended

For us

Forever

Never-end, did

The river flow?

Fast or slow?



No one will know

If we won't show

And we don't go

And live

To die

For a world

That death

Undid



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on Oct. 29 2012 at 6:48 pm
iankizer BRONZE, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
" Be careful what you pretend to be because you are what you pretend to be" -Kurt Vonnegut

Crucified, I love that word. This poem is incredible though. I just read four of your poems, but this is one is definitely the best, it makes me feel like i'm seeing emotion in some abstract form of brain paintings.

on Feb. 29 2012 at 4:25 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

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learn from your past to live for the future.

Yes, our conversations have been quite lacking in depth and existence, haven't they?  And I am honored that you chose this work to restart our online conversements.

on Jan. 29 2012 at 8:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

U kno it just so happened that I was missing u very much, crying my eyes out and what not, and in my missment of you I decididated to seek u out by means of your works. So, HERE I AM!!!!! and quite the hello to u too capitan-and that was no typo,add might I.

on Jan. 29 2012 at 7:44 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

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learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, thanks much, Boosflashman, long time since I talked with you :-)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

dayang. I love the last stanza. I am loving the use of vocabularment. Fait ta danse captain, fait ta danse.