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Black Effort (revised)

February 13, 2012
By Lunatech SILVER, Lindsay, California
Lunatech SILVER, Lindsay, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Rise and Rise again until lambs become lions"


Little is to ask
For a a lot that is done
A lot is to know
What's done is done
Effort is given
None is forgiven
Blind is a heart
With black effort
Dreams broken apart
All is taken
Nothing in the making
Making done for nothing
All is taken
But nothing is forgotten


The author's comments:
revised my poem Black Effort, i thought i could make it a lot better...the beginning of this poem was inspiring but the ending wasn't so good so i made it all better..

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