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Perfect Pair

March 16, 2012
By LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

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If you were a river
And I was a boat,
I'd float to the center where we could elope.

If you were a bottle
Of smooth and rich brandy,
I'd gulp it all down and feel mighty dandy.

If you were a jar
Of smooth peanut butter,
I'd be the bread
Who's surface you'd smother.

So if you were anything
That came in a pair,
Forever and always
Together we'd share.

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Tghermione19 SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2014 at 12:15 pm
Tghermione19 SILVER, Normal Hieghts, California
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Awwwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet, it makes me wish that my boyfriend never broke up with me. :'(     But I have no critque but I can agree with Belladona_Daughterof_Circe, it makes me want a PB and J sandwitch.
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 14 2012 at 8:23 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Pefect Poem ;D
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:50 pm
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
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&quot;Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves.&quot; Ashley Purdy<br /> &quot;Money can&#039;t buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing.&quot; Andy Biersack<br /> &quot;Your not alone&quot; Andy B

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This makes me want a Peanut butter sandwich- and a boyfriend. XD GREAT JOB. XD
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 10:56 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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Awww. ;) I like this poem a lot. It's so cute. I like the first stanza most because it seems the most original! Good job!
LittleSully GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 8:48 pm
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The course of true love never did love smooth.&quot; William Shakespeare

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Wow, can't believe I didn'y catch that, thank you. I really have to get better with spelling and grammer.
leafy said...
on Mar. 19 2012 at 8:43 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

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Oh nice poem- it's cute, I like it ^_^. My only nit-picky criticism would be to change "who's" to "whose," but other than that, it's great :)