Mistake | Teen Ink


May 26, 2012
Lovejuice GOLD,
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You are reading a poem, a story, or a writing of some kind,
When in your reading, a mistaek you find.
Its nothin major, and you read on until another yoo discover!
Then they only get worst, seeminly strewn from covar to cover!
With just one moar loock,
You begen to wonder hoo would bother to publish thiss book!
Its shoddy, poorly-riten, adn litterd with flawss,
butt then A thoght rises throw the others and gives yu pause.
what if the speling doesnot haf 2 be perfect, an the santences nviting?
What if it's all about the message, and not about the writing?

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Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 1:29 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
Thanks a lot! It means a whole bunch to see a comment show up on one of my peices! It really encourages me to write all the more.

Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2012 at 10:52 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

So true. You need to get published. Right now, someone make it happen.

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 2:43 pm
WOW! Loved it. Very witty and clever. Unique and stupendous. I love the ending. It's perfect. A great message. Beautiful writing. Talented writer. Amazing. 5 stars. Would you please comment on my work titled Wizard of Words and On My Back Porch?