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Maybe It Never Ends

June 30, 2012
By pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
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pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
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"Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain."

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I feel like nothing's right
I have gone through all the fight.

Something makes me feel inside
A strange thing I can't desrcribe.

It's been so long you had left.
I haven't seen your face since that day.

I thought you would fade
And then you came to bid me the last wave.

And I know not what to say
Maybe the pain lowered on it's way.
Nothing made me cry that day.

I thought i succeeded,
And the pain is no more needed.

But it proved me wrong once again.
Thoughts creeped into my brain.

Flashbacks within a closed eye
Of the day you said 'goodbye'

Couldn't make out what was happening the other side
Sinking myself deep inside.

Felt myself cold and dry
And suddenly I started to cry.

I made myself go through
All the things I could do.

All the life's depths and bends
Maybe it never ends.

One day I'll rise
And forget all the cries.

Only if I have the faith
Till the one last breath.

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

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C.Tessa SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2013 at 11:43 am
C.Tessa SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Doubt whom you will, but never yourself.<br /> Christian Nestell Bovee<br /> <br /> 2 Timothy 1:7

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I like it, as a tells a story it rhythms the words. I never seen that. It's good.
CelebrateDifferences said...
on Sep. 19 2012 at 10:17 pm
CelebrateDifferences, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Gods of Olympus.&rdquo; Piper stared at Leo. &ldquo;What happened to you?&rdquo;<br /> His hair was greased back. He had welding goggles on his forehead, a lipstick mark on his cheek, tattoos all over his arms, and a T-shirt that read HOT STUFF, BAD BOY, and TEAM LEO.<br /> &ldquo;Long story,&rdquo; he said.&rdquo;

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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it and the rhyming made it all the better.
writer3499 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2012 at 6:59 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

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Your welcome and whatever peices you would like to comment on! I need tips on all of my perices haha.  But I would love to have you comment/rate on "Perfect"  
pratyasha BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2012 at 11:11 pm
pratyasha BRONZE, Kolkata, Other
2 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Behind every beautiful thing there is some kind of pain.&quot;

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thanks. in which work do you want my feedback?
writer3499 GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2012 at 9:42 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

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This is a really great peom!! I loved how it ryhmed as you told the story. Would you mind giving me feenack on my work?
Tam2019 said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 3:58 am
an amazing depiction of being lonely...nd terrorised..in Love..i felt it..by d Heart..!!!!!!!!!!!