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Mountains

July 29, 2012
By ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.&quot; <br /> -Ralph Waldo Emerson


Mountains
growing each day
while peaks reach for the sky
Magestic, you hide behind clouds
and wait.


The author's comments:
I hope you enjoy my cinquain poem!

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on Dec. 31 2013 at 4:28 pm
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.&quot; <br /> -Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you! and thanks for coming to check out some of my work! It means a lot!

PissOff SILVER said...
on Dec. 30 2013 at 12:36 am
PissOff SILVER, Vaughan, Other
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This is a very beautifully simple poem. Perfect for readers who can lose intrest easily. It's the simplictiy of this poem that makes it so extradinary. Now in days it's all about the complextiy in words, but really it's about the simple. This poem gives you something you can simply enjoy without thinking to hard about what it means. Wonderful job. 

on Dec. 29 2012 at 11:13 am
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.&quot; <br /> -Ralph Waldo Emerson

Thank you so much! I have read some of your work as well and wow u r such a good writer! Please continue to read more of my work! Thanks again:)

on Sep. 23 2012 at 9:35 pm
DrkBluPretty GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> &mdash; Twyla Tharp (Dancer/Choreographer)

I really like it, its so simple and sweet and it gives such a nice visual!

on Sep. 10 2012 at 7:42 pm
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail.&quot; <br /> -Ralph Waldo Emerson

aww thanks!!:) ur poems rock!!!

on Sep. 9 2012 at 2:05 pm
McCauliflower SILVER, Whitinsville, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;There&#039;s nothing fundamentally wrong with people. Given a story to enact that puts them in accord with the world, they will live in accord with the world. But given a story to enact that puts them at odds with the world, as yours does, they will live at odds with the world. Given a story to enact in which they are the lords of the world, they will ACT like lords of the world. And, given a story to enact in which the world is a foe to be conquered, they will conquer it like a foe, and one day, inevitably, their foe will lie bleeding to death at their feet, as the world is now.&rdquo;

This is one of those simple writings that I absolutely love.