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Sorrow Song

September 10, 2012
By TheUnwindingCableCar PLATINUM, Plymouth, Indiana
TheUnwindingCableCar PLATINUM, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
What we achieve inwardly will change outer reality. -Plutarch


Two young kids with nothing else
One is left as his whole life melts
Into oblivion his soul has shattered
His own free will, on the ground, tattered
He gave her all he had and more
And he loved her down to his core
Over the years they became one
And now nothing's left, she is gone
He hears her voice every night he dreams
And when he's awake his agony teems
Two young people, both in love
Now one only resides above
And as the boy has broke to pieces
His own life, now it ceases
The pain too much to bear
Has now caused him not to care
And if I die before I wake
I promise her, all of me to take


The author's comments:
It's not a song, but the title fits.

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on Sep. 19 2012 at 3:38 pm
Alvar-Knight SILVER, Harlingen, Texas
7 articles 5 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is said flies,
what is written never dies.

i like it a lot. it speeks of the sorrow i once felt but diffrent.

on Sep. 19 2012 at 3:37 pm
Alvar-Knight SILVER, Harlingen, Texas
7 articles 5 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
what is said flies,
what is written never dies.

cool peom.