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September 5, 2013
By elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.


Why that fighting and war,
Why that killing, what for?
In greater cause,
Because of greater deed,
Or just feeding your ego,
Fulfilling your need?
Do you ever think of just one,
Only one sad face,
Empty street, empty heart,
You leave behind?
Are you aware of the trace,
All the emptiness,
Sad people, lost days,
Nothing more, nothing less?
No empathy,
Or valid values,
Feeling for the others,
Just doing things regardless;
Would awareness;
If you even noticed,
Would it make a difference?
Would less pretending,
Bring a happy ending?
Would you even bother,
Would you even change,
Try to help one another,
Before valid values have gone estranged?


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written : 21.8.2013

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mb777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2013 at 8:49 pm
mb777 GOLD, Thornwood, New York
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I love your use of literary tecniques such as rhetorical questions! The poem just flowed so nicely!

Milipasle said...
on Sep. 16 2013 at 3:27 pm
An interesting poem, built to provoke one's thoughts of it's own world. Truly a touching tale of sadness and suffering.

on Sep. 16 2013 at 9:27 am
GuardianoftheStars GOLD, Shongaloo, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Let's tell young people the best books are yet to be written; the best painting, the best government, the best of everything is yet to be done by them."
-John Erslcine

This is very powerful and moving.  I liked it!! :D Good job.