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Your Smile

November 29, 2008
By WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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Your smile was there,
On my first day of school.
Through the good times and the bad.
Your smile was here,
When the rain wouldn’t stop,
Your smile brightened my day.
Your smile was here,
As I played in my room,
As I ran around the yard,
As I arrived at your house,
Your smile was there.
As always,
You made me happy,
Your smile,
Made me smile,
Your smile was there,
When I was sad,
Your smile made me happy again.
Your smile was there,
Once before you were gone.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece about my Mom-Mom. She pasted away in November of 2004 of Brain Cancer. This was a very hard loss for me and writing this piece made me look at the loss from a different point of view. It makes me think that she is still smiling at me in more ways than one. =)
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Haleeeeeeeeeeey said...
on Jan. 2 2009 at 5:56 pm
It's amazing/awesome/spectacular! I loved it!
Friends :. said...
on Dec. 31 2008 at 1:32 am
Morgan,


Your poem is amazing! We love it and you deserve to win first prize! good-no great- no luck from FROGS!


-Your friends, Haley and Rachel
DEBK said...
on Dec. 15 2008 at 8:22 pm
I know your Mom Mom was so thrilled with everything about you, and I know how difficult it is to lose a Grandmother, I lost mine when I was 13 and I still think about her every day. You are a very talented young writer. Mom Mom loves you from heaven and is very proud of you!
niiccholleex3 said...
on Dec. 11 2008 at 1:33 pm
i love it. and because i commented twice, i should get a school bus for christmas<3( : -nichole
Frogisker said...
on Dec. 11 2008 at 1:33 pm
Great....It's awesome!
daddyos said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 3:28 pm
OMG!!! Its wonderful...Mom Mom is so proud of you... "your a poet and now we know it"
Rosemary G. said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 1:39 pm
Morgan,


What a beautiful piece - you are truly a gifted writer. Your Grandmom is so very proud of you and you are truly giving her a smile as well!


All the best to you - Rosemary
sdsVA said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 2:30 am
What a beautiful poem. You always made your grandmother smile, she would be so proud of you. I know I am. Keep writing, you have so many wonderful things to say.
LibWard said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 12:27 am
I loved this! Each word was perfect! Makes us remember that something as humble as a smile can be so powerful. Keep writing... please!!!
FluffyBunny123 said...
on Dec. 8 2008 at 7:59 pm
This is the best one on this site! Your an awesome writer! I <333333 it!
ChickenFrogs said...
on Dec. 8 2008 at 7:45 pm
Awesome! I loved it! I HOPE YOU GET IN THE MAGAZINE!
Deb W. said...
on Dec. 8 2008 at 1:06 am
I knew before I read your "author comment" that this poem was about your Mom-Mom. She was an amazing person and she is truly smiling down on you Morgan - and is so very proud of you! lv debbie
a2b2c2tri said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 10:55 pm
Beautiful poem about your Mom-Mom. She was a special woman:-)
Niley_JB_Smiley said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 10:37 pm
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!! it's got so much meaning!!!!!!!
DaretoDream said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 5:48 pm
Wow. I love this. You are an amazing poet. It's lovely.
jfwoehri said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 3:31 am
Very Lovely
mkmck said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 3:12 am
Keep writting what your heart knows and you will find success.This poem is a simple truth of how a loving smile is so precious and should never be taken for granted. This is a true celebration of love.
Kathi909 said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 1:56 am
This is a wonderful poem that brings back wonderful memories of my Grandparents too!
nicholejustsaidd said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 1:44 am
I LOVED IT MORGAN ! you're famous( : hahahhah
AmyisCool said...
on Dec. 6 2008 at 1:25 am
I LOVED IT!!!!