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June 4, 2014
By LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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You've chosen fighting an anger-now you feel sick
So far in your heart guilt has barely made a nick.

You've made your pick, and cannot turn around
Now the fiery wrath within your heart does abound
The thumping is a fast, hollow sound.

You wish you hadn't of sunk this deep
Happiness is a treasure you rarely reap
Your life is full of nightmares, like a fitful sleep.

You're not sure you can make things right
While being blinded by thoughts with no good sight
But you will try to see the light.

Yes, with all your might.

© David K., Birkenhead, UK

The author's comments:
I just wrote this one evening randomly...It's one of my rare rhyming poems...I don't think that this is as good as my other poems (the free verse ones)..I mean, my other ones aren't so good either but my rhyming poems aren't particularly good in my opinion..
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LavanderMayday SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2014 at 4:18 am
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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Omg typo!! I meant Poem
LavanderMayday SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 6:15 pm
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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Okay thank you so so so much! Yes and the title "Help!" For my other prn...I hate that title and now I can't edit it
PianoKeys97 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 2:15 pm
PianoKeys97 PLATINUM, Medford, New Jersey
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"You can be the ripest, juiciest peach in the world, and there's still going to be somebody who hates peaches." -Dita Von Teese

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The mood you create is really creepy, haunting, and almost regretful. I think it's so neat. And the pattern of your rhyming only adds to it more.  It's a lot more cryptic than "Help!" was and requires me to search for a deeper meaning. I love it. Keep writing, you have a lot of potential! ;)