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You and Life equals Power

December 25, 2008
By bookworm24 BRONZE, Boca Raton, Florida
bookworm24 BRONZE, Boca Raton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Believe in yourself.


Things can go by so rapid
There it is, where you left it

But how come how superior or miserable
You can always find a way to let it go

You may want to hold on to memories
But not too much or you’ll lose all possibilities

Life is like a door open
It doesn’t matter if you close a window

To whom it does
Well, they will make a fuss

But, to you, to you is what counts
You have the power to make light shine all around

You may ask, where, where do I find this power
I can’t answer that or I will be a liar


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Fendo said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 10:28 am
Really nice!! And it really looks like "You DO have the power to make light shine all around". Keep going strong!

Andrea said...
on Jan. 21 2009 at 4:31 pm
Uau!!!! parabens!!! vc e incrivel, com apenas 11 anos escrever um poema desse tao profundo!!! vc vai longe garota!!! obs: sou filha do sergio ribas amigo do seu avo!!

Bjo

Andrea

on Jan. 21 2009 at 2:57 am
Wow! Que chique! Que Deus continue te abençoando!

Thais said...
on Jan. 16 2009 at 5:09 pm
Nathalia,



Fico super feliz com todas as tuas conquistas! Parabens menina! Voce vai longe! Que orgulho pra tu mae, hein? Bjao de quem daqui do Brasil nao esquece de voces nunca! Thais

sergio r. said...
on Jan. 15 2009 at 2:18 pm
Nathalia Congratulations !!!! You had a good start,keep going. "You can always find a way..." With admiration Sergio

Tia Joire said...
on Jan. 13 2009 at 8:26 pm
It's amazing that you became a young English poet in a short period of time.Now you can be my teacher.

You really have the power to make everything shines around you.Keep doing that.

God bless you.

on Jan. 13 2009 at 8:08 pm
Fico muito feliz e orgulhosa ao ver que tenho uma bisneta tão inteligente ... Parabens da bisa que te ama muito

Hedva said...
on Jan. 12 2009 at 7:45 pm
Hi Nathalia It is a very beautiful poem, you are a smart and taleted girl. We love you Hedva, Reuven Gili

amilcar said...
on Jan. 12 2009 at 11:29 am
querida neta



mais uma vez es motivo de orgulho para todos nos.

te amamos muito

vovo amilcar

vovo sueli

Jane said...
on Jan. 12 2009 at 12:37 am
What a beautiful poem, Nathalia! You were able to capture the essence of what leads a person to true success.



Keep walking your own path, listening to your own heart, enjoying the beauty of simply being you,... You'll find so much happiness along the way.



With much admiration, Jane.

Gloria B. said...
on Jan. 10 2009 at 10:14 pm
Dear Nathalia, we are very proud of you. I whish you a bright life with an open heart, full of happiness and love.

Miss you. Uncle Bubi and aunt Gloria

sueli said...
on Jan. 10 2009 at 4:56 pm
querida neta

minhas amigas custarao para acreditar que uma menina de apenas 11 anos tivesse tamanha sensibilidade,e que com apenas 4 anos morando nos USA ja tenha esse dominio do idioma ingles

parabens vovo te ama muito

gazaniga said...
on Jan. 10 2009 at 10:58 am
we love you

TATA tu es motivo de orgulho pra toda tua familia.

vovo te ama muito

SiBraza said...
on Jan. 10 2009 at 12:39 am
Dear Nathalia,



Your poem is beautiful.

You rock girl!

No path is too challenging for you!

Keep up the good work.



Simone, Gladimir

cgazaniga said...
on Jan. 9 2009 at 2:49 pm
It’s a very beautiful poem, just like your heart, and I agree with it, it’s up to you to make your life the most amazing journey; you just have to keep your mind and your heart wild open to all the possibilities, and never look back, just keeping moving forward!

on Jan. 9 2009 at 12:18 pm
Simply Wonderful, wonderful, fantastic!

Congratulations my niece most beautiful in the world .... kisses to everyone

Tia Ana =) said...
on Jan. 9 2009 at 10:48 am
Minha linda Tata seu poema é muito maduro e bonito! (tá tudo bem que não entendi algumas palavrinhas, mas o Aurélio me ajudou! ;) hehehe sou muito orgulhosa de vc, sa sabe! Parabéns e continue escrevendo assim está lindo tata!

mil beijos

a tia te ama mto! SAUDADES GRANDE!