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Once Upon A Time

January 20, 2009
By sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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Once upon a time
We danced beneath the stars,
The moon was our spotlight,
The waterfall; our music,
Our hearts; our love,
Once upon a time
We were two parts of a whole;
Not something broken,
Once upon a time
You would smile,
And I would laugh,
My love; was my heart,
Once upon a time
I looked at the
Grim, tearless faces;
And it brought me back to
When we,
Danced under the stars;
Back to when
You and I were
Once upon a Time.



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on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:08 pm
Why would you be broken? A person couldn't possibly break!

anabelle said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 8:28 pm
Dearest Home; dearest house of hope:

I love stories that begin with once upon and time and end with happily ever after. How joyful! I believe that life also begins with "Once upon a time" and ends with "Happily ever after." This can only happen with you in our lives; only because of you. I love you, Home, and you made my life begin with once upon a time and end with happily ever after. I thank you for that so much. Best wishes to your aunt and to you. I do not want her to suffer, and I do not want you to move far, far, away.:( ♥

Love,

Your friend forever:

Little Angel Anabelle Hope

on Feb. 2 2009 at 12:43 am
iAy! iEste es mola y chulo! Me encantan todos las poemas que tu estas escribiendola. Mi corazon lorra de tus palabras. Tu eres mas de mi vida a mi, mucho mucho mas. Fortunadamente, Una Vez Sobre El Cal un Tiempo es muy hermosa y indiscriptible. Tu pintas una pictura enfrente de mis ojos con tus poemas. (Wow! This is amazing! I love all of your poems that you write! My heart cries from your words! You are more than my life to me; much much more. Fortunately, Once Upon a Time is very beautiful and indescribable. You paint a picture in front of my eyes with your poems!)