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When Daddy Left Me.

February 22, 2009
By ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'Miles to go before I sleep'
- Robert Frost


Looking at the empty seat at the
breakfast table.
Looking at the empty side of
mummy's wardrobe.
Looking at the empty space in
the driveway.
Looking at the empty
cigarette ash tray.
Looking at all of these empty things,
reminds me of the day,
when Daddy left me.


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on Jan. 5 2010 at 1:53 am
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
19 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Miles to go before I sleep'
- Robert Frost

thank you all for the lovely comments :) xo

Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 4:59 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

beautiful <3

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:06 am
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very well done. Keep writing.

God bless,

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on Oct. 19 2009 at 1:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe this poem could almost make you cry... but its well written