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Do you love me?

February 23, 2009
By Brooklyn GOLD, Granada Hills, California
Brooklyn GOLD, Granada Hills, California
12 articles 20 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die tomorrow, dream as if you'll live forever. -James Dean

We're alone
Just us
No one else
to snicker
I love it
lip sealer
tongue twister
I love you
a nudge
lashes flutter
Do you love me?
a caress
a gaze
or is it a stare?
Do you?
a breath
a sigh
meaning what?
cheeks flush
pink, red
colors of love?
Prove it.
Diamonds are dead
words are meaningless
Show me
how you feel
Should I believe you?
a smile
an embrace
deep inside
I remember now.
Actions scream over words
this is
true love.

The author's comments:
I literally wrote this in about five minutes with no revisions. That's how I write most of my work.

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ff5fan SILVER said...
on Apr. 2 2009 at 7:45 pm
ff5fan SILVER, Loganville, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let us so live that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry.
-Mark Twain

oooh i love this one:) and thats how i write most of my stuff too,in like 5 minutes. great job!