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Immortal in a Memory

February 23, 2009
By AlwaysWrite28 DIAMOND, Flushing, New York
AlwaysWrite28 DIAMOND, Flushing, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What makes a flower a flower? And why doesn't the dandelion qualify?" -From my poem "Dandelions"

Ran so fast
I cannot breathe
Beat the wind to the dunes
Surpassed the trees
Hands and toes
Numb with cold
I feel immortal,
I will never grow old
By my side my sisters
We raced along the shore
We are frozen in this memory

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VampireBabiE said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 4:49 pm
what inspired u to write this? its amazing! i can really connect with this poem.