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Silver Dollar Moon

March 2, 2009
By TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life.”
Winston Churchill


Everything's tumbling and falling;
To the,
Ground
Ground
Ground

The silent buildings sneer;
They make no,
Sound
Sound
Sound

They ugly people pass and they,
Frown
Frown
Frown

My life reflects in a puddle,
Watch it
Drown
Drown
Drown

A bird flaps its wings;
See it,
Fly
Fly
Fly

A tiny little speck in the
Sky
Sky
Sky

The buildings tower above,
Oh so,
High
High
High

As a street corner girl lets out a
Sigh
Sigh
Sigh

She leans on one hip,
Shifting her position
and looks up at the bruise-blackened sky ,
taking her breath;
See it echo in her eyes,
the silver dollar moon and the stars wave goodbye



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on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:50 pm
TaylorLynn GOLD, Ray City, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have enemies? Good. That means you've stood up for something, sometime in your life.”
Winston Churchill

Thank you so much for your comment! I agree I love it!

Hover BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:05 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

I loved the repeating words. It made it almost... haunting... I love it!!!!!!!!

Good

Job

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Hee hee!!!! :D