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Swim Inside Your Head

March 19, 2009
By Fataldoseofirony BRONZE, Schwenksville, Pennsylvania
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i wish that i could take a swim inside your head
dive right in to your memories of me
through your eyes i could see what you see
take it back or give it all I'd know what to say
they say suspense is what kills, and you cant escape death
so don't try to hide, just hope for the best
theres no black or white just the gray between
you're a little bit of everything, everything to me.
if i needed a place to stay
would you open your heart
never let me go away?

© Ashlee R., Plano, TX

The author's comments:
It's short, I know but it has much meaning to me. This is the first piece I have written that wasn't of the darker nature. I met a girl who changed my life and this is what poured out onto paper.
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