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A Love Cycle

April 1, 2009
By mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
Louisa May Alcott

If you ever get a broken heart,
can it ever be fixed?
And when your heart gets broken
Until your heart can't get broken anymore,
Will it actually start to disapper?
But then, when you think it's lost forever,
You fall in love again.
Even though you think your heart is going to burst open,
You can't help it.
And as time goes on,
You find your heart growing back,
good as new.
No cracks.
Your heart is whole once more.

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This article has 3 comments.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 1:30 am
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I like the idea; I think if you perhaps described the breaking of the heart literally, or gave the pain, the cracks, some imagery - it would be a poem that the reader can really imagine in his/ her mind. Great job!

on May. 4 2009 at 12:15 am
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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very well done. you wrote what seems imposible but can really happen. bravo once more!

on Apr. 30 2009 at 3:15 am
darkangel1326 GOLD, Paramount, California
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ur poem is good too. :D thanx 4 the comment