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So Long

January 4, 2010
By erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two great days in a person's life, the day we are born and the day we discover why."


“Daddy, I’m not tired.”
said the little girl.
He always wanted to control her world.
“You know what happens,
when you don’t do what you’re told.”
“Oh please Daddy no!”
With ever hit
a silent tear falls,
but God never answeres her calls.
She doesn’t know what to do.
Daddy says it’s for her own good.
Maybe he’s just misunderstood.
But it never stops.
Now she doesn’t feel the pain,
all her prayers have gone down the drain.
She’s given up hope
for a better tomorrow.
All there is left is sorrow.
But one day Daddy went to far.
He wanted her to sleep,
but not this deep.
She’s gone forever.
God answered her call.
Now she won’t ever fall.
She only asks God one question,
now that she’s strong.
“What took you so long?”



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Milo! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:53 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:38 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we&#039;re going.&quot; Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls<br /> &quot;The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound.&quot; Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

oh my gosh. this was so powerfully amazing. 5 stars, definitely

on Feb. 1 2010 at 8:04 pm
erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
25 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;There are two great days in a person&#039;s life, the day we are born and the day we discover why.&quot;

It's about a little girl that's abused by her controlling father and the abuse ends up killing her, but throughout the whole time she's praying to God for help

on Jan. 31 2010 at 8:26 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

whats this poem bout?