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In The End
February 14, 2010
Please don't come my way,
do not look at me and smile.
Pretend you can't see my pain
and just walk away for a while.
I’ll bow my head in defeat,
if you promise to pass me by.
I’ll silence my heart forever,
if you'll look away as I cry.
Just turn your head the other way
and notice anyone but me.
Don’t attempt to make things better,
because there’s no way to set me free.
I don’t want you to look at me anymore,
I don’t want your sorrowful glance.
Please don’t ask for forgiveness;
you’ve blown another chance.
So let it rest, let it be done
watch it sink into our past.
I’m done with you; you’re done with me,
in the end, our memories will last.
© Sared S., Pompton Plains, NJ
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This article has 25 comments.
Winter-Razorblade BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2012 at 10:17 am
Absolutely beautiful... I'm speechless.
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 6:40 pm
I really liked this poem!! I didn't think it would be about someone who broke up, though. It might have more meaning if you change the ending and use this ending for another poem. Please look at my work and criticize it!
HateKnuckle SILVER said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 8:50 pm
I liked it but only because I perceived it as you not wanting to be felt sorry for because of your desire to experience your sadness. Obviously I was wrong. 4 stars.
pnkninja11 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:56 am
I liked it when you said, "Please don’t ask for forgiveness;
you’ve blown another chance." It reminds me of someone who I once cared for that didn't really care about me.
you’ve blown another chance." It reminds me of someone who I once cared for that didn't really care about me.
Bookwormwriter SILVER said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:47 pm
your rhythm and rhyming is impeccable! i love it! your writing is all about feelings when someone does something to you. i love iT!!! if you can, please check out my work, comment, and rate! thanks! also, the same message to any and all who see this comment!
surviver101 GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:05 pm
I LOVE IT!!! It makes me want to cry but in a good way I love it!!!!
aliveonink GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:28 pm
i love your writting!great job!
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:03 pm
You have a great rhythm to your poetry! I loved it. I totally understand this characters feelings. Great job! Check out my work sometime if you ever get the chance!
taintedannex GOLD said...
on May. 31 2010 at 6:18 am
This is such a great poem. It's sad, but beautifully written.
I can relate. The emotions? Completely spot on.
<3 :)
VampiericRain GOLD said...
on May. 22 2010 at 4:04 pm
This is why I love your work. Your so amazing at putting feelings into words. Five stars! :)
alexandraacreel GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 7:20 pm
I reallyy enjoyed your passion in your writing, and i love how you can portray someone's exact feelings through these words ! great job !
celloizmylife PLATINUM said...
on May. 15 2010 at 9:29 am
It was beautiful! I most certainly did not deserve that comment from you, or even the chance for my writing to be read by you when your own is as magnificent as that of a professional! I love it!
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 7:28 am
Very emotional and powerful, I really enjoyed it. :)
