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a few words MAG

October 25, 2010
By Anonymous

what is love?
is it a purple feather
woven through your hair,
or is it a daisy
that catches wind on a spring afternoon?

i,
for one,
hope it is both
so that i may pin it to my blouse
and keep it softly,

keep it with me.


The author's comments:
this is about love. and flowers. and feathers and love.

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on Feb. 14 2011 at 2:14 pm
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?<br /> Pooh: You don&#039;t spell it, you feel it

cute!!!!!!

on Feb. 3 2011 at 8:59 pm
WerewolfWriting BRONZE, Eerie, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not about the breaths we take but about the people who take our breath away.&quot;

Wow, I enjoyed this a lot. It revealed the lightness and bubbly feeling when you are in love, and I secretly liked it because my room is plastered with feathers and flowers. :) Very good. And congratulations on being published! Did they just send you an Email saying they were going to publish as soon as you submitted it?